Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Haibun-Haiku: A rumble echoes in Las Vegas


a rumble echoes
charcoal clouds conceal the sun
an afternoon storm

I heard a rumbling and looked out my living room window to see charcoal gray clouds covering the sun. I think it is going to rain. I listen to the noon news, the meteorologist said it might rain, but I do not remember if he said a 30% chance of rain or a 40% chance. It is days like this that make me happy I do not hang my wet clothes outside any more. I do not see or hear rain yet, but I expect it to start raining any time.

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  • Friday, July 11, 2008

    No Rain Last Night

    There was a storm warning for Southern Nevada yesterday. It did not rain in the section of Las Vegas I live in last night. That was a disappointment; I enjoy watching thunderstorms because they remind me of my childhood. They also give me good ideas for poems and stories. I have not written a thunderstorm poem or story in a while.

    I do not need to watch a thunderstorm to write a poem or story about one. I have plenty of memories from my childhood that I could use. However, sitting in my living room or on the patio and writing about a storm while it is occurring is different from writing about one from memory. Memory colors the events surrounding the storm. When you write about a storm that is taking place around you feel the threat and the emotions first hand.

    Yesterday clouds gathered, but it did not rain in my area. I noticed the humidity and I had a little bit of heat rash, but there was not rain. Rather like a spring day in Oklahoma, except that there were clouds. I remember humidity in Oklahoma without clouds. At least in Las Vegas when there is humidity, there are clouds. Actually, hat sounds like a good idea for a poem, which will probably end up being another bitter love poem.

    Most of my love poem, unless they are mystic love poems, turns out bitter. Maybe that is why I do not write love stories, because they would turn out bitter. I do put love interest in some of my short stories, but those usually turn out bitter. Perhaps bitter is not the right word here, in the short story I submitted to Short Shots the official writing.com contest, the love interest turn out to be a traitor.

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